he found him and then he did this to which he replied to him, "what?"

[vanitashaze]

Using pronouns in a same-sex romance? AHHHHH. It's enough to drive you to epithets.

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[sinkwriter.livejournal.com]

HAHAHHAHAAA

I know! It drives me batty! My brain starts to explode, trying to follow that kind of sentence. Who's saying what to whom? *head desk*

[vanitashaze.livejournal.com]

Ooh, I especially love those really, REALLY long chains of same-sex dialogue, where they occasionally repeat themselves and forget to use names and it's either he said / he said / he said or no dialogue tags at all. Oh yes. Fun times.