No, seriously, people. I really do want feedback. Badly.

I'm trying to decide whether it's prudent or just pathetic to post the same response-meme twice in a row, but I figure, fuck it, no one replied the first time and I could use all the help I can get with writing. Especially since I signed up for a three month long heart attack sgabigbang; if I'm doing anything badly, I really want to know before I write 40,000+ words of that bad.

So, I'll say it again: please, please give me feedback. Even if it's just, you suck. Or, you have no concept of plot. (Which is true.) Just, make like the Beatles. HELP.

THE ANONYMOUS WRITING FEEDBACK MEME, 
BECAUSE OBVIOUSLY THE FIRST TIME WAS NOT 
ENOUGH (AGH, AGH, AGH).

ETA: I am sorry if I appear frustrated and short-tempered, it's just that, well, I am. The Bad has set in. Beware.