Wow... *is stunned* That was just incredible. I love the way you do Adam. He's crazy, but in kind of a almost quiet, internal way. (I wrote crazy!Adam, and he scared me.) The emotion in this is just incredible, and the way you stop and start and leave of and restart things is just amazing.
And the visualizations. Awesome. I could just see different parts - especially the rats. I also loved the
light is to water as love is to
line, and for a bit I was trying to finish it myself (cuz I love those things), but then I gave up, and leaving it open was just brilliant.
Overall, absolutely freaking awesome and incredible and all those words. 30 kinds of win!
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Date: 2008-01-25 07:38 pm (UTC)And the visualizations. Awesome. I could just see different parts - especially the rats. I also loved the
light is to water as love is to
line, and for a bit I was trying to finish it myself (cuz I love those things), but then I gave up, and leaving it open was just brilliant.
Overall, absolutely freaking awesome and incredible and all those words. 30 kinds of win!
<3