Wow. The vividness, the frustration, the anguish of this piece cannot accurately be expressed in such a small comment box. It oozes a dry, sarcastic, witty sort of pain unlike any I've really ever seen in fanfiction- and so appropriate to the character. All the unfinished bits, the crossings-out, the false starts- perfect and real.

"Adam is dry, dry, dry wonderbread, and the best thing since it was sliced." I wasn't sure whether to laugh or cry at all the fantastic lines like this one. So I did a little bit of both.

GWUH. I can't gush enough. You deserve- nay, require applause.