ticketsonmyself ([identity profile] ticketsonmyself.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] vanitashaze 2009-08-19 09:53 am (UTC)

This is the third part

Ha, I like Teyla thinking of her long shower as scrubbing the sound of Rodney off her skin - the muscle-knotting, angry-sweat frustration she must have been feeling toward everyone in the jumper by the end of the week!

Teyla wanted, suddenly, to fight her

Incursion of the past tense?

I like the overall mood of the story's end.

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