ext_22431 ([identity profile] lazy-8s.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] vanitashaze 2009-07-05 02:38 pm (UTC)


Awesome! I love how you weaved the horrific experience of a young John touched by the disappearance of his friend to the present, where a team member has disappeared and apparently will not return. Also, the dialogue between Rodney and John was so poignant and bittersweet.

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