This? Is amazing. All the little asides you have about the House of M, Maya and Claire's quite comforting of each other after all the horror of last season, how subtextual and subtle their relationship is, and Peter. Oh, the way you have the efect Peter's heroics have ona ll those around him who've learned to love him but can't get that sort of intimacy they crave from him...it's a thing of beauty, right down to the description of this as cruel.